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The line chart shows the rate of people living in New Zealand from 1950 to 2050.

The line chart shows the rate of people living in New Zealand from 1950 to 2050. B7Jp5
The line chart shows the rate of people living in New Zealand from 1950 to 2050. Overall, the New Zealand population was aging, with significantly more people falling into groups over 38 and fewer people under 27. People New Zealand population is projected to continue this trend until 2050 with the demographic structure 38-65 making up the majority of the graph In 1950, the percentage of the elderlz in New Zealand was 60%, tripling the figure for the 25-37 age groups. Meanwhile, 25% of total citizens New Zealand population was 38-45 and the people aged below was the lowest between 1950 and 1990. From 1990 to 2000, the figure for the aged and the middle-aged slightly climbed to a peak of 80% and 48% respectively. Wheres the figure for the children exceeded that for the young adults. In 2050, the figure for the aged 65 and over is expected to drop gradually to 55%, but remains the highest figure in the chart. Meanwhile, the number of people at 38-45 is not expected to fluctuate slightly. While the amount of people at the age of 0-14 rose significantly, the quantity of people aged 25-37 is predicted to decrease sharply and almost no one in this age by 2050.
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Zealand from 1950 to 2050.

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Zealand population was aging, with
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falling into groups over 38 and fewer
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under 27.
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Zealand population
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In 1950, the percentage of the
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Zealand was 60%, tripling the
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for the 25-37 age groups. Meanwhile, 25% of total citizens
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Zealand population was 38-45 and the
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people
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below was the lowest between 1950 and 1990. From 1990 to 2000, the
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and the middle-aged
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climbed to a peak of 80% and 48%
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for the children exceeded that for the young adults.

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for the
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aged
65 and over is
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to drop
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remains the highest
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in the chart. Meanwhile, the number of
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at 38-45 is not
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at the age of 0-14 rose
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25-37
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and almost no one in this age by 2050.
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