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the chart below shows literacy rate in several different countries around the world

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As it presented in the table obviously compares the ratio of uneducated population, divided by sex in four regions of the world. Overall, turning to the details clearly, literacy races were the highest in country D. Even though, as it is shown in the illustration there were more illiterate men than women in all religions. Moreover, as it can be seen there was rarely unlettered in developed countries such as C or D from approximately 1 to 2 percent.
As it presented in the table
obviously
compares the ratio of uneducated population, divided by sex in four regions of the world.
Overall
, turning to the
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details
clearly
, literacy races were the highest in country D.
Even though
, as it
is shown
in the illustration there were more illiterate
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men
than women in all religions.
Moreover
, as it can be
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seen
there was rarely unlettered in
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developed countries
such as C or D from approximately 1 to 2 percent.
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IELTS academic the chart below shows literacy rate in several different countries around the world

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