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how the avocado oil is produced

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The diagram provides the way how the avocado oil is produced in the factory. Overall, there are eight procedures beginning with filtering of avocados and ending with avocado oil. To begin with, the input product is avocado, the by-product is fertilizer and the product oil. Firstly, avocados are manually classified by the workers to separate the fresh and rotten ones. As soon as the good ones are washed, they are carried to the industrial machine to crush and then blend the fruits. The blended avocados are put into the two-staged centrifuge before the final oil is produced. In stage one, they are separated as the solids and liquids and oils and water in stage two by spinning the machine very quickly. The wasted water is removed. The whole process takes place at the maximum temperature between 45-50 degrees Celsius. The wasted solids are carried along with the seeds and skins from the crusher to the orchard as a fertilizer. The final stage is that finished oil is refined by the filter and stored in the tank before being poured by the dispenser.

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