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The line chart shows the amount of income from movie theatre ticket and DVD sales in The United State and worldwide in ten years

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The line chart shows the amount of income from movie theatre ticket and DVD sales in The United State and worldwide in ten years Overall, It is clear that international cinema sales and international DVD sales observed an upward trend at both. While North American DVD and cinema sales fluctuated during the decade. In 2004, three in four lines rose Regarding the given graph, international cinema sales witnessed an upward trend from 2001 to 2004. In the next year, it decreased slightly from 29 US$ billion to nearly 25 US$ billion. For the last of the period, it increased significantly and reached a peak in 2010 at around 32 US$ billion. The same trend was true for international DVD sales, the line went up in most of the given period and accounted for the highest at nearly 22 US$ billion at the end From 2001 to 2004, North American DVD sales rose slightly. For the past 6 years, it declined roughly to nearly 18 US$ billion in 2010. North American cinema sales remained stable during al the period
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the amount of income from movie
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ticket and DVD
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in The United State and worldwide in ten years

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that
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international
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cinema
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sales
and
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international
DVD
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sales
observed an upward trend at both. While North American DVD and
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cinema
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sales
fluctuated during the decade. In 2004, three in four lines
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rose


Regarding the
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graph,
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international
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cinema
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witnessed an upward trend from 2001 to 2004. In the
next
year, it decreased
slightly
from 29 US$
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billion
to
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25 US$
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billion
. For the last of the period, it increased
significantly
and reached a peak in 2010 at around 32 US$
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billion
. The same trend was true for
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international
DVD
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sales
, the line went up in most of the
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period and accounted for the highest at
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22 US$
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billion
at the
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end


From 2001 to 2004, North American DVD
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rose
slightly
. For the past 6 years, it declined roughly to
nearly
18 US$
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billion
in 2010. North American
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remained stable during
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IELTS academic The line chart shows the amount of income from movie theatre ticket and DVD sales in The United State and worldwide in ten years

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