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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of males, females and children in the UK consuming the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables, in three separate years (2002, 2006 and 2010).

The bar chart illustrates the percentages of males, females and children in the UK consuming the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables, in three separate years (2002, 2006 and 2010). Lb2m8
The bar charts below illustrate the proportion of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended amount of fruit and vegetables on a daily basis in three different years. Overall, it is clear that women were the highest consumer in terms of fruit and vegetables while the opposite was true for children. In addition, the figure for men consumers stood at the average percent. The highest figure for women was 32 percent in 2006 compared to 28 percent of men. In two different years the proportion of women and men usually was the highest rank for the amount of fruit and vegetable consumption. In 2002, the percentage of women and men who consumed the amount of fruit and vegetable, standing at 22 and 25 percent followed by a slight increase to 24 and 27 respectively The lowest proportion for children who consumed the figure for fruit and vegetable on a daily basis was 11 percent in 2002 but later a moderate rise to 16 percent in 2006. In 2010 the figure for children consumption went down slightly to 14 percent.
The bar charts below illustrate the proportion of the population in the UK who consumed the recommended amount of
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was 32
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in 2006 compared to 28
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consumption. In 2002, the percentage of
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, standing at 22 and 25
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in 2002
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the percentages of males, females and children in the UK consuming the recommended daily amount of fruit and vegetables, in three separate years (2002, 2006 and 2010).

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