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the two maps compare the changes of a community center.

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The given two maps illustrate how this community center has been changed. Overall, it can be clearly seen that some significant changes have been made to redecorate this center. In terms of the first map, which shows the present time, it can be said that almost %75 of the map is car park. There is a reception right under the 2 meeting rooms and IT room is surrounded by meeting rooms, reception, art room and car park. However, location of the places was not like the present in the past. Even though the meeting rooms were on the same place, there was a café under them instead of the reception. The shape of the IT room was different and gym used to occur under it. Another significant detail is the fact that there was a garden in the southeast of the map. Moreover, car park was not as big as now.
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illustrate how this community center has been
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changed
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seen
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some
significant
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changes
have
been made
to redecorate this center.

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map
, which
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the present time, it can
be said
that almost %75 of the
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map
is car park. There is a reception right under the 2 meeting
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rooms
and IT
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room
is surrounded
by meeting
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rooms
, reception, art
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room
and car park.

However
, location of the places was not like the present in the past.
Even though
the meeting
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rooms
were on the same place, there was a café under them
instead
of the reception. The shape of the IT
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room
was
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different
and gym
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used
to occur under it. Another significant detail is the fact that there was a garden in the southeast of the
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map
.
Moreover
, car park was not as
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big
as
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IELTS academic the two maps compare the changes of a community center.

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3 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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