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The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates various places visited by the Canadian citizens, like theatre, cinema, library and zoo. Further the classification has been made by dividing the residents into migrants born in other countries and the once who are born in Canada. Overall Cinema is the most visited place by the local residents while the theatres seems to be the least preferable place. The people born in Canada as well as the migrants born in English speaking countries give preference to watching cinemas while the once who are migrants from other countries like to visit the library. The Canadians born in the country like to visit the cinema and the same is the case with the migrants who were born in English speaking countries. (70% and 65% respectively). Only 50 percent of the migrants born with nationalities other than the English speaking ones have visited the cinema halls. Comparatively the theatre is the least preferred place visited by the Canadian locals whereas the migrants from English countries have the highest visit percentage i. e 25%. Relatively the preference by the locally born individuals and the migrants from the non-English speaking countries is very low (10%and 20% respectively) Moving to library where around 55 percent of the migrants from other countries have loved to visit the library compared to the stats of English speaking nationality migrants and Canadian born individuals which is 40 and 34 percent respectively. Finally around a 50 percent of the residents who are migrants born in English speaking nationalities have visited the zoo. Only 35 percent of the migrants from other countries have made a visit to the zoo.

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