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The line chart illustrates the proportion of music turnover by 3 various ways over a course of 8 years, starting in 2011.

The line chart illustrates the proportion of music turnover by 3 various ways over a course of 8 years, starting in 2011. raDGJ
The line chart illustrates the proportion of music turnover by 3 various ways over a course of 8 years, starting in 2011. Overall, it is immediately obvious that the most striking feature is a substantial drop in CDs purchased as well as a significant rise in sales of streams. In addition, downloads registered the highest figure in 2014. In 2011, revenue from streams stood at about 5%, in comparison with around 55% in CDs. Over the period shown, sales of streams experienced a considerable increase to merely over 40% while the opposite trend was seen in CDs bought with its figure hitting the lowest point around 25% in 2018. Especially, turnover from both ways was same (nearly 30%) by 2016. Approximately 35% was the percentage of revenue from downloads, which witnessed a slight growth and reached the peak of merely over 40% in 2014. However, its sales then saw a gradual decrease to precisely 30% in 2018. At the end of period, the proportion of money streams gaining surpassed other forms and became the most popular method.
The line chart illustrates the proportion of music turnover by 3 various ways
over
a course of 8 years, starting in 2011.

Overall
, it is immediately obvious that the most striking feature is a substantial drop in CDs
purchased
as well
as a significant rise in sales of
streams
.
In addition
, downloads registered the highest figure in 2014.

In 2011, revenue from
streams
stood at about 5%,
in comparison
with around 55% in CDs.
Over
the period shown, sales of
streams
experienced a considerable increase to
merely
over
40% while the opposite trend was
seen
in CDs
bought
with its figure hitting the lowest point around 25% in 2018.
Especially
, turnover from both ways was same (
nearly
30%) by 2016.

Approximately 35% was the percentage of revenue from downloads, which witnessed a slight growth and reached the peak of
merely
over
40% in 2014.
However
, its sales then
saw
a gradual decrease to
precisely
30% in 2018. At the
end
of period, the proportion of money
streams
gaining surpassed other forms and became the most popular method.
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IELTS academic The line chart illustrates the proportion of music turnover by 3 various ways over a course of 8 years, starting in 2011.

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