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The line chart gives information about the number of the average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services

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The line chart gives information about the number of the average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services over a course 10 years, starting from 2001. Overall, a closer look at the line chart highlights the fact that the number of cell phone services witnessed an upward trend while that of residential phone services decreased throughout the period shown. Looking at the line chart in more detail, the number of cell phone services was $200 in 2001. There was a slight rise in the number of cell phone services stood at $300 in 2003. This figure continued significantly grew by $450 and hit the highest point in 2010. Over the following 5 years, the number of residential phone services sharply fell from around $700 in 2001 to $500 in 2006, dropped by $200. This figure then significantly declined to $400 in the end of the period.
The line chart gives information about the
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of the average annual expenditures on
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cell
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phone
and residential
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phone
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services
over a course 10 years, starting from 2001.

Overall
, a closer look at the line chart highlights the fact that the
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number
of
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cell
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phone
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services
witnessed an upward trend while that of residential
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phone
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services
decreased throughout the period shown.

Looking at the line chart in more detail, the
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number
of
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cell
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phone
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services
was $200 in 2001. There was a slight rise in the
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number
of
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cell
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phone
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services
stood at $300 in 2003. This figure continued
significantly
grew by $450 and hit the highest point in 2010.

Over the following 5 years, the
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of residential
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phone
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services
sharply
fell from around $700 in 2001 to $500 in 2006, dropped by $200. This figure then
significantly
declined to $400 in the
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of the period.
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IELTS academic The line chart gives information about the number of the average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services

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