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The chart shows the amount of wheat export in three places from 1985 to 1990.

The chart shows the amount of wheat export in three places from 1985 to 1990. Ol297
The line chart illustrates quantity of exported wheat from Australia, Canada and European countries between 1985 and 1990. It is apparent from the chart that Canada exported more wheat than Australia and European community in most of period shown. Overall, the amount of wheat exported from Canada fluctuated and the figure for Australia fell, however, wheat exportation of many countries in Europe experienced steady growth between 1985 and 1990. In 1985, Canada achieved the highest amount of exported wheat with nearly 20 million tonnes while the figures for European countries and Australia were 17 and 15 million tonnes respectively. Noticeably, in 1988, Canada exported a significant amount of wheat and peaked at 25 million tonnes, whereas, there were a slight declining in exportation of both Australia and European countries over the same time period. From 1988 to 1990, the figure for exported wheat of Canada reduced sharply to under 15 million tonnes before going up to nearly 20 at the end of period and figure for Australia remained stable with 11 million tonnes. Nevertheless, the quantity of wheat exported from countries in Europe increased rapidly from 15 to 21 million tonnes over the last 2 years.
The line chart illustrates quantity of
exported
wheat
from Australia, Canada and European
countries
between 1985 and 1990.

It is apparent from the chart that Canada
exported
more
wheat
than Australia and European community in
most of period
shown.
Overall
, the amount of
wheat
exported
from Canada fluctuated and the
figure
for Australia fell,
however
,
wheat
exportation of
many
countries
in Europe experienced steady growth between 1985 and 1990.

In 1985, Canada achieved the highest amount of
exported
wheat
with
nearly
20
million
tonnes while the
figures
for European
countries
and Australia were 17 and 15
million
tonnes
respectively
.

Noticeably
, in 1988, Canada
exported
a significant amount of
wheat
and peaked at 25
million
tonnes, whereas, there were a slight declining in exportation of both Australia and European
countries
over the same time period.

From 1988 to 1990, the
figure
for
exported
wheat
of Canada
reduced
sharply
to under 15
million
tonnes
before
going up to
nearly
20 at the
end
of period and
figure
for Australia remained stable with 11
million
tonnes.
Nevertheless
, the quantity of
wheat
exported
from
countries
in Europe increased
rapidly
from 15 to 21
million
tonnes over the last 2 years.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the amount of wheat export in three places from 1985 to 1990.

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