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The line graph provides details of the data about the level of unemployment in three country from 1991 and 2005.

The line graph provides details of the data about the level of unemployment in three country from 1991 and 2005. BY9BX
The line graph provides details of the data about the level of unemployment in three country from 1991 and 2005 while the table gives information about the proportion of male and female in these countries who worked in 1991. Overall, it is evident that Spain has the highest unemployment rate among the three coubtries for almost a decade. To begin with, in 1991, Spain had the highest unemployment rate at 13% increasing markedly to 18% (1993-1995), then failing steadily to 9% in 2005.
The line graph provides
details
of the data about the level of unemployment in three country
from 1991 and 2005
while the table gives information about the proportion of male and female in these countries who worked in 1991.
Overall
, it is evident that Spain has the highest unemployment rate among the three
coubtries
for almost a decade. To
begin
with, in 1991, Spain had the highest unemployment rate at 13% increasing
markedly
to 18% (1993-1995), then failing
steadily
to 9% in 2005.
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IELTS academic The line graph provides details of the data about the level of unemployment in three country from 1991 and 2005.

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  American English
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83 words
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