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Graph below shows the progress of world's poorest countries between 2002 2018

Graph below shows the progress of world's poorest countries between 2002 2018 o8mBD

The given line graph illustrates the information about the progress of low-income nations from 2000 to 2018. Overall, it can be seen clearly that the progress of poor countries continuously increased in the field of at least clean drinking water, basic sanitation, clean cooking fuel and electricity while these nations are decreased their rate of poverty and children mortality and lower secondary school competition. Going into further details, the percentage of people accessed clean water for drinking increased from 60 % to 70% which was the highest proportion. Same trend was followed in approach to sanitation and clean cooking fuel this figure rose almost 10% for each from 2000 to 2018. Only 40% people access electricity in 2000 but for the next 18 years this figure sharply increased after some fluctuations. The percentage of people who access to lower secondary school competition was almost increased continuously from 31 % to 51%. The poor countries are largely progressed in decreasing poverty rate this figure dropped by 20%. Same trade was followed in the rate of mortality of children under age 5 this figure dropped from 50 % to 20%.

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