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The line chart demonstrates the number of marriages and divorces in the UK over a period of 38 years, starting from 1961.

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The line chart demonstrates the number of marriages and divorces in the UK over a period of 38 years, starting from 1961. Overall, it is clearly evident that while the number of first marriages witnessed a downward trend in the given period, the opposite was true for divorces. In 1961, the number of first marriages in the UK was approximately 350. 000, whereas the figures for divorces and remarriages were nearly 50. 000 and 25. 000 respectively. Over the following 10 years, the number of marriages increased gradually to nearly 400. 000. The figures for divorces and remarriages also witnessed an incline to nearly 150. 000. From 1971 to 1999, first marriages saw a significant fall from 400. 000 in 1971 to just around 200. 000 at the end of the given period. By contrast, the figure for divorces and remarriages rose significantly from just about 25000 and 50000 to 150000 and 100000 respectively.
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in the UK over a period of 38 years, starting from 1961.

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, it is
clearly
evident that while the
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of
first
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marriages
witnessed a downward trend in the
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period, the opposite was true for divorces.

In 1961, the
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of
first
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in the UK was approximately 350. 000, whereas the figures for
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divorces
and remarriages were
nearly
50. 000 and 25.
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000
respectively
. Over the following 10 years, the
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marriages
increased
gradually
to
nearly
400. 000. The figures for
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divorces
and remarriages
also
witnessed an incline to
nearly
150. 000.

From 1971 to 1999,
first
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marriages
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a significant fall from 400. 000 in 1971 to
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around 200. 000 at the
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end
of the
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period. By contrast, the figure for
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divorces
and remarriages rose
significantly
from
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just
about 25000 and 50000 to 150000 and 100000
respectively
.

IELTS academic The line chart demonstrates the number of marriages and divorces in the UK over a period of 38 years, starting from 1961.

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