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The line chart below shows the data about the household recycling rates on some various countries from 2006 to 2015.

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Demonstrated line chart furnished the data regarding the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2006 and 2015. Further observations of the data revels that uk had highest recycling rates than other nations further more we can also scrutinize that France had lowest in recycling than other countries. Observations from above data it clearly seen that In 2005 Germany had 20% ration of household recycling after that it rocketed till 50% similar with uk. Whereas, France 50% most elevated however it declined in 2007 to 2013 at 30% after that France's ration grew up 20-40% but it was lowest. Considering fact about the graph that uk had only 35% in 2005 less than germany compared with France it was less However dramatically rosed up in 2005 up to 60% than france and germany.
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IELTS academic The line chart below shows the data about the household recycling rates on some various countries from 2006 to 2015.

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