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The given bar chart and table show us the time spent in leisure and household activities among men and women in UK. As we can see, women spent more time at house chore whereas of men dedicate slightly more time at leisure activities. Tv, video and radio were main hobby among Britain people. men spent 137 minutes per day which is 19 minutes more than woman. Second popular activity for enjoying time was reading which men and women spent virtually same time at it. Last leisure activity in this table is sport. Men only dedicated quarter of hour at exercising per day however women spent less time in it and only exercised for 11 minutes each day. Cooking and washing were main household activities. Despite of females spent 77 minute per day at these things, men only dedicated two-fifth of this time. On the average, women spent 36 minutes in shopping whereas men spent only 23 minutes. Clothes washing and ironing were like cooking and women spent more times than men. However, men spent two times as much women in repairing. Overall, the time which spent in leisure activity was very close in males and females but women dedicated too many times than men in household keeping.
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