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The grapgh below gives information about sales of five types of vehicles in country A from 1990 with projected sales until 2020.

The grapgh below gives information about sales of five types of vehicles in country A from 1990 with projected sales until 2020. kgnb2
The line graph illustrates sales of five different vehicle types in country A over three decades since 1990 with future predictions to 2020. In general, cars are more popular than vans and motorbikes, and sales of large cars and station wagons have dropped while those of smaller cars have dramatically increased. In 1990, large cars over 1. 8 litres were the most popular vehicles sold, of about 2. 7 million. Sale of both these cars and station wagons followed the same pattern to a steady decrease, to a low of around million units in 2010. This falling in sales will continue to 2020. In contrast, smaller cars were less popular in 1990, by about 1. 8 million sold, but sales increased significantly in the decades from 2000 to 2010, to a peak of 3. 7 million. A smaller increase will expected in the next ten years. Sales of both motorbikes and vans are remained steady at around 0. 5 million per year and will continue to do so over the period.
The line graph illustrates
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vehicle types in country A over three decades since 1990 with future predictions to 2020.
In general
,
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cars
are more popular than vans and motorbikes, and
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sales
of large
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cars
and station wagons have dropped while those of smaller
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cars
have
dramatically
increased.

In 1990, large
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cars
over 1. 8
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litres
were the most popular vehicles sold, of about 2. 7
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million
.
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Sale
of both these
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cars
and station wagons followed the same pattern to a steady decrease, to a low of around
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million
units in 2010. This falling in
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sales
will continue to 2020.
In contrast
, smaller
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cars
were less popular in 1990, by about 1. 8
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million
sold,
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but
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sales
increased
significantly
in the decades from 2000 to 2010, to a peak of 3. 7
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million
. A smaller increase will
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expected
in the
next
ten years.

Sales of both motorbikes and vans
are remained
steady at around 0. 5
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million
per year and will continue to do
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so
over the period.

IELTS academic The grapgh below gives information about sales of five types of vehicles in country A from 1990 with projected sales until 2020.

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6.0
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