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A diagram show islip town changes in 1960 and 2000

A diagram show islip town changes in 1960 and 2000 3LNYN

Ina comprehensive details is put forth in the form of a couple of diagrams with regard to the change which are expected to be done it islip town in the future. A fleeting glance at the details show there are some quiet significant differences and key similarities in both the figuresThe most striking feature of the details is firstly the town size is increased and shops will also replaced by bus station shopping centre and car park. Also one main road has changed by only pedestrian walkAlthough some houses are built near to park as well as school and house situated same place as past. Moreover, one dual carriageway also seen in the outside of town. Overall, it can be observed that some of developments are done in future also some place are divided by new style

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details
is put
 forth in the form of a couple of diagrams with regard to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 which are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to be done
 it Possible spelling mistake found.slipISIPi slipis lip
islip
 town in the future. A fleeting glance at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 quiet significant differences and key similarities in both the Possible spelling mistake found.figures
figuresThe
 most striking feature of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 is firstly
 the town size is increased
 and shops will also
 replaced by bus station shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and car park. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 one main road has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 pedestrian Possible spelling mistake found.walkthrough
walkAlthough
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
are built
 near to park as well
 as school and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 situated same place as past. Moreover
, one dual carriageway also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
The usual preposition for "outside" is "on" not "in".  Revise: "on the outside".on the outside
in the outside
 of town. Overall
, it can be observed
 that After 'some of', you should use 'the' ("some of the developments") or simply say "some developments".some of the developmentssome developments
some of developments
are done
 in future also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Did you mean "places"?places
place
are divided
 by new style