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The line chart below shows the acid level in mouth from consuming sugars/ honey. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the acid level in mouth from consuming sugars/ honey. WyGdb
The poly line graph illustrates the information about the level of acid after eating sugars and honey in mouth during eaten moments. However, units are measured in PHI level. In overall, there are lots of transformation can be notice in acid level which comes from consuming sugars and honey over the periods. With regards to graph, the honey are most popular for spreading acid level among mouth which accounted at 5 PHI level in 5 minutes. After this, it starts increase dramatically and reached to peak level at 7 PHI level during 25 minutes. Likewise, the acid level of honey after consuming remain constant in remaining minutes. The graph further proves that cane sugar attained a lowest figure for leaving acid level which can be observed at less than 5 PHI level between 5 minutes period. Similarly, it shows ups and down trend and showing a drastic rise from 40 minutes. Furthermore, fruit sugar which accounted for above 4 PHI level in the beginning of the minutes. Beside that, the acid level of fruit sugar remained stable between 15 minutes as well as 25 minutes. Lastly, it continuously growing at 7 PHI level at the end of the period.
The
poly
line graph illustrates the information about the
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level
of
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acid
after eating
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sugars
and honey in mouth during eaten moments.
However
, units
are measured
in PHI level.

In
overall
, there are lots of transformation can be notice in
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acid
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level
which
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comes
from consuming
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sugars
and honey over the periods.

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With regards to
graph, the honey are most popular for spreading
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acid
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level
among mouth which accounted at 5 PHI
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level
in 5 minutes. After this, it
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starts
increase
dramatically
and reached to peak
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level
at 7 PHI
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level
during 25 minutes.
Likewise
, the
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acid
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level
of honey after consuming remain constant in remaining minutes.

The graph
further
proves that cane
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sugar
attained
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a
lowest figure for leaving
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acid
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level
which can
be observed
at less than 5 PHI
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level
between 5 minutes period.
Similarly
, it
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shows
ups and down trend and showing a drastic rise from 40 minutes.
Furthermore
, fruit
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sugar
which accounted for above 4 PHI
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level
in the beginning of the minutes. Beside that, the
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acid
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level
of fruit
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sugar
remained stable between 15 minutes
as well
as 25 minutes.
Lastly
, it
continuously
growing at 7 PHI
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level
at the
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end
of the period.
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IELTS academic The line chart below shows the acid level in mouth from consuming sugars/ honey.

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