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The diagrams show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010

The diagrams show a museum and its surroundings in 1990 and 2010 GMWEB

The given maps illustrate the changes of a museum and almost things surrounding this area over two years namely 1990 and 2010. In particular, the general area was divided into 2 section, meanwhile the western one contained more functions, the eastern one had exclusively been built for the car park and the garden (each services had occupied relatively equivalent area) before the garden was removed to give way to the car park in 2010. Concerning the former one, there were some small details that we can see in the north of this area, while the store room was enlarged a bit, the entrance of the museum was witnessed the opposite trend, namely the reduction in size to give space for the unnamed area which was to the right of the store room, the authority noticeably reconstructed this unclear area by knocking down the door between 2 rooms. Moreover, the area which was below the entrance could also experience this renovation, because the door between rooms was pulled down to expand the size of the Shop on the right area. Significantly, because the mentioned variation, the upper area could be offered to broaden while the under area had to be shrunk; otherwise, the cottage in this region was converted to a café which could serve for entertainment. Additionally, the places which surrounded 2 main area including the garden, the Path and the main Road was remain unchanged. Overall, this museum experienced the introduce of new facilities and renovation of existing ones.

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given
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changes
 of a museum and almost things surrounding this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 over two years namely
 1990 and 2010.

In particular
, the general You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
was divided
 into 2 Possible agreement error. The noun 'section' seems to be countable, so consider using: "sections".sections
section
, meanwhile the western one contained more functions, the eastern one had exclusively been built
 for the car park and the garden (each services had occupied relatively
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area)
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the garden was removed
 to give way to the car park in 2010.

Concerning the former one, there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
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small
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details
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see
 in the north of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, while the store You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
was enlarged
 a bit, the entrance of the museum was witnessed
 the opposite trend, namely
 the reduction in size to give space for the unnamed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 which was to the right of the store You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, the authority noticeably
 reconstructed this unclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 by knocking down the door between 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
. Moreover
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 which was below the entrance could also
 experience this renovation, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the door between You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
rooms
was pulled
 down to expand the size of the Shop on the right You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Significantly
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the mentioned variation, the upper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 could be offered
 to broaden while the under You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 had to be shrunk
; otherwise
, the cottage in this region was converted
 to a café which could serve for entertainment.

Additionally
, the places which surrounded 2 main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 including the garden, the Path and the main Road was Consider using a past participle here: "remained".remained
remain
 unchanged.

Overall
, this museum experienced After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'introduce' is correct. If 'introduce' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the introduce
 of new facilities and renovation of existing ones. 