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the graph gives information about consumption of energy in the USA for 10 years from 1980 until 2030. overall, petrol and oil increase from 35 to 50. while coal experience changed a rather up from 16 to 29. weals nuclear solar/ wind hydropower is maintain

the graph gives information about consumption of energy in the USA for 10 years from 1980 until 2030. overall, petrol and oil increase from 35 to 50. while coal experience changed a rather up from 16 to 29. weals nuclear solar/ wind hydropower is maintain Aja5w
recording to the data, in 1980 initially that the highest consumtion of petrol and oil which grow in four years, it achieved 46 quadrillion units. it was keeped up with coal and natural gas succeed the second highest of quadrillion units. in 2005 coal surged is 3 quadrillion units. in additional, remarning sour such as nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower are not look like with another that went down 5 quadrillion unit. like wise the sour to maintain the same level.
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consumtion
of petrol and oil which grow in four years, it achieved 46 quadrillion units.
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up with coal and natural gas succeed the second highest of quadrillion units.
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in
2005 coal surged is 3 quadrillion units.

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additional,
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remarning
sour such as nuclear, solar/wind, and hydropower are not look like with another that went down 5 quadrillion unit.
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like
wise the sour to maintain the same level.
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IELTS academic the graph gives information about consumption of energy in the USA for 10 years from 1980 until 2030. overall, petrol and oil increase from 35 to 50. while coal experience changed a rather up from 16 to 29. weals nuclear solar/ wind hydropower is maintain

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