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The given table clearly depicts the figure of five European government spending on education and training and also the participation of their countries’ 18-24 year-old-people in education in 2010. Regarding to the contribution of government, we can obviously see that the percentage of money spending in Sweden was 25%, lead to the highest score. The second largest number was 13%, which was represented by Hungarey, followed by UK and Czech republic with the figure of 10% and 9%, respectively. By contrast, Poland authority just spends very little expenditure on this field as the rate was just one fifth as much as that in Sweden. According to the joining by individuals aging from 18 to 24, interestingly, though Poland government provide the relatively limited fund in education and training, the young people in this country seemed to have the great participation reached up up to 44%, ranking the top among 5 countries, this figure was very close to their Sweden counterpart (40%) and 10% higher than that in Hungarey. Noticeably, the proportion relating to Czech republic and UK continued to constitute the lowest numbers in this issue with 23% and 27%, respectively. Overall, when it comes to national budget distribution in education, there was a huge gap among listed countries; however, in terms of participation in this field, although the distance was still large but it was smaller than that of mentioned authorities’ money provision

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