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The line chart below shows serious violent crime levels from 1978 to 2000 in the US.

The line chart below shows serious violent crime levels from 1978 to 2000 in the US. Prgdp
Represented is a graph reviewing collected data conserning the serious violent crime levels between 1978 and 2000 in the USA. Overall, in 1988 the figure of arrests for crime minimize, while the number of total crime reached a peak. Looking at the details, there was flactuatioin the number of total violent crime and victimisation reported to police. Total crime stood at 3, 5 thousand in 1978. Pinpointing the peak in 1988 before declining gradually to approximately 3thousand in 2000. The level of victimisation reported to the police flactuated over the period from 1978 to 1990. Afterwards ir decriced significantly and finished at about 1 thousand in 2000. By contrast, the figure of crimes reported by police rose slowly all time during 22 years. In 1994 it was a boom in the figure of crimes, that reported by police and ended in 2000 at 2 thousand, while the number of arrests for violent crimes started at just under 0, 5 thousand in 1986. After that it went up slightly to 1 thousand in 1996. The level of arrests for crime having dropped in 1998. Until the end it stood unchanged in 2000
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the serious violent
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levels between 1978 and 2000 in the USA.
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, in 1988 the figure of arrests for
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crime
minimize, while the number of total
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crime
reached a peak. Looking at the
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details
, there was
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flactuatioin
the number of total violent
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and
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victimisation
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to
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. Total
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stood at 3, 5 thousand in 1978. Pinpointing the peak in 1988
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declining
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to approximately 3thousand in 2000. The level of
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victimisation
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reported
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flactuated
over the period from 1978 to 1990.
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decriced
significantly
and finished at about 1 thousand in 2000. By contrast, the figure of
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crimes
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by
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rose
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all time during 22 years. In
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, that
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and ended in 2000 at 2 thousand, while the number of arrests for violent
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under 0, 5 thousand in 1986.
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having dropped in 1998.
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it stood unchanged in 2000
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