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The bar chart shows the information about migration Uzbek people to other countries

The bar chart shows the information about migration Uzbek people to other countries 9QQ70
Given is a bar chart providing the data regarding the Uzbek people's traveling to many foreign countries. As is appaer, peple, who migrate to England are 4 times more than Korea. It can be seen clearly from the Spain and Japa 's rank that, the level of people who move to these foreign countries arrenge 20000. While, uzbeks mifrated to Turkey some mire than those European and Asian countries, just over than 20000. By contrast, the number of Uzbek peple's rank aboit taveling to England arrenge 4 times more than Korea.
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is a bar chart providing the data regarding the Uzbek
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people
's traveling to
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many
foreign countries. As is
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appaer
,
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peple
, who migrate to England are 4 times more than Korea. It can be
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seen
clearly
from the Spain and
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Japa
's rank that, the level of
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people
who
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move
to these foreign countries
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arrenge
20000. While,
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uzbeks
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mifrated
to Turkey
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some
mire than those European and Asian countries,
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just
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over
than 20000. By contrast, the number of Uzbek
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peple
's rank
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aboit
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taveling
to England
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arrenge
4 times more than Korea.
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