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the life cycle of a cotton t-shirt

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The diagram illustrates the process of the life cycle of a cotton t-shirt. Overall, there are nine steps in this process, beginning with picking cotton and ending in the recycling bin or disposal. In the first stage of the process, The cotton is picked by a machine called a cotton picker. Subsequently, it is compacted into bales which are delivered to factories by lorry. After that, the cotton is threaded by a machine. Once the cotton has been threaded, the thread is weaved. After that, the t-shirt is designed whatever you want. Once they have been designed, the t-shirt is dyed in many colors. When the t-shirt has been dried, The t-shirt is packed into packaging. After that, the t-shirt is delivered to the shop. After the customers wore it and got old so Finally, the t-shirt is recycled or incinerated or threw it away.
The diagram illustrates the process of the life cycle of a cotton
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t-shirt
.
Overall
, there are nine steps in this process, beginning with picking cotton and ending in the recycling bin or disposal.

In the
first
stage of the process, The cotton
is picked
by a machine called a cotton picker.
Subsequently
, it
is compacted
into bales which
are delivered
to factories by lorry. After that, the cotton
is threaded
by a machine. Once the cotton has
been threaded
, the thread is
Consider using a past participle here: "woven".
weaved
. After that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
t-shirt
is designed
whatever you want.

Once they have
been designed
, the
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t-shirt
is dyed
in
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many
colors. When the
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t-shirt
has
been dried
, The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
t-shirt
is packed
into packaging. After that, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
t-shirt
is delivered
to the shop. After the customers wore it and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
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old
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so
Finally
, the
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t-shirt
is recycled
or incinerated or threw it away.
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IELTS academic the life cycle of a cotton t-shirt

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
145 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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