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The table below shows the information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The table below shows the information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries. Yr7j
The given table is representating the population percentage of people of age 65 and more in Canada, Germany and UK for the year 1988 and 2000 along with the forecast for the year 2030. Overall, fluctuation in their population is following an upwards trend in forty-two years of time-period while the highest number of people with age of 65 and above are present in Germany and their lowest count is there in UK amongst the three. To commence, Canada was having 16. 32 percent in 1988 and in 2000 the rate goes upto 20. 67% whereas the forecast for 2030 is given 26. 35 percent. Secondly, 20. 45% of the senior citizens was in the year 1988 in Germany, they accelerated steadily in the further thirty years from 25. 32% to 30. 42% (given forecasted data). Similarly, the initial population count was 14. 23 percent which increased by 0. 66 percent in next twelve years. Then in the latter year, it will be showing a dramatical growth as per the predicted percentage that is 20. 35
The
given
table is
representating
the population percentage of
people
of age 65 and more in Canada, Germany and UK for the
year
1988 and 2000 along with the forecast for the
year
2030.
Overall
, fluctuation in their population is following an upwards trend in forty-two years of time-period while the highest number of
people
with age of 65 and above are present in Germany and their lowest count is there in UK amongst the three. To commence, Canada was having 16. 32
percent
in 1988 and in 2000 the rate goes
upto
20. 67% whereas the forecast for 2030 is
given
26. 35
percent
.
Secondly
, 20. 45% of the senior citizens was in the
year
1988 in Germany, they accelerated
steadily
in the
further
thirty years from 25. 32% to 30. 42% (
given
forecasted data).
Similarly
, the initial population count was 14. 23
percent
which increased by 0. 66
percent
in
next
twelve years. Then in the latter
year
, it will be showing a
dramatical
growth as per the predicted percentage
that is
20. 35
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IELTS academic The table below shows the information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

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