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The provided bar chart illustrates data on annual changes in average home estimating in five various towns from 1990to 2002.

The provided bar chart illustrates data on annual changes in average home estimating in five various towns from 1990to 2002. b5dW
Overall, London accounted for the majority of prices, while the minimum proportion was observed in Madrid throughout the years given. In detail, London made up the negative 2. 5 % during 1990-1995, whereas this figure rocketed 11% at the end of the period. Madrid stood at about 1% in the beginning of the period, whereas this ratio increased and reached its peak of 4% during 1996-2002. Tokyo included negative 7. 5 % from 1990 to 1995, then a slightly rising was experienced in Tokyo. The prices for New York comprised negative 5% in the beginning of the period, while this proportion climbed and became 5% during 1996-2002. The percentage change consisted of nearly 2% in Frankfurt in the years of 1990-1995, whereas the prices decreased and reaching 1% in the end of the year.
Overall
, London accounted for the majority of prices, while the minimum proportion
was observed
in Madrid throughout the years
given
.

In detail, London made up the
negative
2. 5 % during 1990-1995, whereas this figure rocketed 11% at the
end
of the period. Madrid stood at about 1% in the beginning of the period, whereas this ratio increased and reached its peak of 4% during 1996-2002. Tokyo included
negative
7. 5 % from 1990 to 1995, then a
slightly
rising
was experienced
in Tokyo. The prices for New York comprised
negative
5% in the beginning of the period, while this proportion climbed and became 5% during 1996-2002. The percentage
change
consisted of
nearly
2% in Frankfurt in the years of 1990-1995, whereas the prices decreased and reaching 1% in the
end
of the year.
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IELTS academic The provided bar chart illustrates data on annual changes in average home estimating in five various towns from 1990to 2002.

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