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The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Rp3p
The given graph provides information about the amount of four recycled materials in a country between 1982 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that the materials paper and cardboard as well as glass containers had the highest recycling rate. Plastic materials however, had a much lower recycling rate. First of all, the materials paper and cardboard as well as glass containers both started to get recycled in 1982. Paper and cardboard had in total the highest recycling rate. It started with 65% in 1982, after that and fluctuated in 1986 and returned to a percentage of 65% in 1990. Furthermore, in 1994 it peaked at a percentage of 80 and then slightly decreased to an amount of 70%, just like in 1986. The proportion of glass containers varied between the years 1982 and 1994 but then it started to steadily increase up until it reached it´s peak of 60% in 2010. The aluminium cans started to get recycled in 1986 and since then it only increased up to 45% in 2010. In contrast to all the other materials, the percentage of plastic remained somewhat steady during the period of 1990 and 2010. It started with a percentage of 2% and increased slightly up to 9% in 2010.
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graph provides information about the amount of four recycled
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materials
in a country between 1982 and 2010.

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paper and cardboard
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as glass containers had the highest recycling rate. Plastic
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however
, had a much lower recycling rate.

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paper and cardboard
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recycled in 1982. Paper and cardboard had in total the highest recycling rate. It
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with 65% in 1982, after that and fluctuated in 1986 and returned to a
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percentage
of 65% in 1990.
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percentage
of 80 and then
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decreased to an amount of 70%,
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like in 1986.

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increase up until it reached
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peak of 60% in 2010. The
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cans
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recycled in 1986 and since then it
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increased up to 45% in 2010.
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, the
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of plastic remained somewhat steady during the period of 1990 and 2010. It
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of 2% and increased
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up to 9% in 2010.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

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