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The information that labor force in America from 1930 to 2010

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The information that labor force in America from 1930 to 2010 is depicted by line graph From overall perspective, it readily apparent that expect the Farming labor force, other types of labour showed upwards trend in given time period With regard to cultivation labour, decreasing from 75%to 60% In 1930 to 1970. before going to reach at dip the percentage of farming labor was 35% in 1990. Farming, fishing and foresting then plunged with exponential throughout the period. In 1930, the percentage of industrial labor force fluctuated between 5%to 20% till 1980. There was dramatic increase observed in percentage of industrial labor force, it accounted to 38% in 2010Moving further, the rate of technical and sales was 2 in 1930. In next years, it accounted less than quarter. After years, it pro-lifer by 38%. There was only 10% difference between technical and sales office in 2010. Other services constant growth till end of the 2010
The information that
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in America from 1930 to 2010
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by line graph From
overall
perspective, it
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apparent that
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the Farming
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, other types of
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labour
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showed
upwards trend in
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time period With regard to cultivation
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labour
, decreasing from 75%to 60% In 1930 to 1970.
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before
going to reach at dip the percentage of farming
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was 35% in 1990. Farming, fishing and foresting then plunged with exponential throughout the period. In 1930, the percentage of industrial
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labor
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force
fluctuated between 5%to 20% till 1980. There was dramatic increase observed in percentage of industrial
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, it accounted to 38% in 2010Moving
further
, the rate of technical and sales was 2 in 1930. In
next
years, it accounted less than quarter. After years,
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by 38%. There was
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10% difference between technical and sales office in 2010. Other services constant growth till
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of the 2010
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IELTS academic The information that labor force in America from 1930 to 2010

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