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The diagram how to generate electricity from coal

The diagram how to generate electricity from coal GrVXm

The diagramatic representations describes the step by step method of electricity generation from coal Overall, It could be clearly seen that the production of electricity from coal it is the artificial method requires major five steps. In the first stage, coal is sent to a pulseriser connected to a conveyor belt where it is crushed to make a powder milled coal passed to boiler and coal power burn at high temperature after that hot gases and heat energy which convert water into steam. Next, the steam is sent into a turbine shaft to rotate at a high speed. Turbine is connected to generator. Generator is making electricity although Transformers are converted dc to ac voltage use in household and industrial purpose. Water steam is passed to condenser. Also water purification as well as re-used water used to the boiler for reheating. Boiler are connected to the ash system.

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 to the boiler for reheating. Boiler are connected
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IELTS academic The diagram how to generate electricity from coal

Academic

American English

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148 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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