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the changes of the island in 20 years

the changes of the island in 20 years YyD0d

the provided maps indicate the changes in an island during a twenty time period. As can be seen, there have been some developments specially in the south and the east of the area. there is an extended motorway, dividing the existing farm from church, new hotel, sky scraper and residential area. more over, a new studium is constructed to the north of the island. the church, having been surrounded by many houses, and the farm to the north of it have remained the same as they always were. in addition, there are the bridge and windmill to the north east of the region which are the features of the original island. In the south of the bridge, a new hospital with a space for cars has been built. to sum up, most of the changes in the island have been made for residential purposes and improving facilities.

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studium
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island
. In the south of the bridge, a new hospital with a space for cars has been built
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 sum up, most of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
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