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The information regarding the thunderstone town how it is current looking and planned for changing in future has depicted in the diagram. At a first glance, at present airfield area is situated at north East side of the map and connected with one Road however, it is proposed that area will be changed into the industrial estate and attached with two Road. Railway station at a similar place there will be no change to planned in it. There is a simple road now near to gas station beside, in future planned it will be converted into Ring Road which connected to all four directions of the road. Observing further, now A2 Road end in right corner of South side although, A4 big road will be added to plan in future which connected to A2 Road. There is only one road now which is attached to the town centre but in future, if A4 Road will be connected with the town centre from the bottom of south side. One Highway will be connected to town centre which is under planning in future. Overall, there

The information regarding the thunderstone town how it is current looking and planned for changing in future has depicted in the diagram. At a first glance, at present airfield area is situated at north East side of the map and connected with one Road however, it is proposed that area will be changed into the industrial estate and attached with two Road. Railway station at a similar place there will be no change to planned in it. There is a simple road now near to gas station beside, in future planned it will be converted into Ring Road which connected to all four directions of the road. Observing further, now A2 Road end in right corner of South side although, A4 big road will be added to plan in future which connected to A2 Road. There is only one road now which is attached to the town centre but in future, if A4 Road will be connected with the town centre from the bottom of south side. One Highway will be connected to town centre which is under planning in future. Overall, there mkad
The information regarding the thunderstone town how it is current looking and planned for changing in future has depicted in the diagram. At a first glance, at present airfield area is situated at north East side of the map and connected with one Road however, it is proposed that area will be changed into the industrial estate and attached with two Road. Railway station at a similar place there will be no change to planned in it. There is a simple road now near to gas station beside, in future planned it will be converted into Ring Road which connected to all four directions of the road. Observing further, now A2 Road end in right corner of South side although, A4 big road will be added to plan in future which connected to A2 Road. There is only one road now which is attached to the town centre but in future, if A4 Road will be connected with the town centre from the bottom of south side. One Highway will be connected to town centre which is under planning in future. Overall, there are few things are situated at similar place and some planned for changing in future.
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thunderstone
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has depicted in the diagram.

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first
glance, at present airfield area
is situated
at north East side of the map and
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connected
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Road
however
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is proposed
that area will be
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changed
into the industrial estate and attached with two
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Road
. Railway station at a similar place there will be no
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road
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near to gas station beside, in
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planned
it will
be converted
into Ring
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which
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connected
to all four directions of the road.

Observing
further
,
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A2
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in right corner of South side although, A4
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big
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road
will be
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. There is
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centre
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, if A4
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from the bottom of south side. One Highway will be
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which is under planning
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IELTS academic The information regarding the thunderstone town how it is current looking and planned for changing in future has depicted in the diagram. At a first glance, at present airfield area is situated at north East side of the map and connected with one Road however, it is proposed that area will be changed into the industrial estate and attached with two Road. Railway station at a similar place there will be no change to planned in it. There is a simple road now near to gas station beside, in future planned it will be converted into Ring Road which connected to all four directions of the road. Observing further, now A2 Road end in right corner of South side although, A4 big road will be added to plan in future which connected to A2 Road. There is only one road now which is attached to the town centre but in future, if A4 Road will be connected with the town centre from the bottom of south side. One Highway will be connected to town centre which is under planning in future. Overall, there

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