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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. 7Rdy
The bar chart provides information about the percentage of people in Canada using multiple social networking sites for two years including 2014 and 2015. Overall, about one-fifth people living in Canada uses no social networking sites, whereas, approximately one-third Canadians of the total population uses one social networking site whereas the remaining population maintains multiple social networking sites in the year 2014 and 2015. Initially, 22 % of people using no social sites in 2014 which was decreased significantly in 2015. However, 36% of Canadians used one social networking site in 2014 and the number decreased in 2015 making approximately one-third of the total population. Although, 23% of people used two sites for social networking, which was increased a little bit in 2015 making about one-fourth of the total population. The number of people using three sites increased by 4% in 2015, which constituted 16%. Very few people used four sites in 2014 for social networking, which slightly increased in 2015 making only 8%. Only 2% of Canadians used five sites for social networking which was increased by only 2% in the year 2015.
The bar chart provides information about the percentage of
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for two years including 2014 and 2015.

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living in Canada
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, whereas, approximately one-third Canadians of the total population
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whereas the remaining population maintains multiple
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in the year 2014 and 2015.

Initially
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in 2014 which
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in 2014 and the number decreased in 2015 making approximately one-third of the total population.

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in 2015 making about one-fourth of the total population. The number of
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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