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The graph below gives information about total oil use of 4 main consumers from 2009 to 2030

The graph below gives information about total oil use of 4 main consumers from 2009 to 2030 mkod

The line chart depict the detailed information about oil consumption by 4 region Us, China, Western Europe and Japan and Middle East over a period of 21 years from 2009 to 2030. Looking from overall perspective, it is readily apparent that, US is leading country for oil usage per day, whereas it is expect to fall dramatically. Western Europe and Japan will continue to decline to become lowest point in the end of the period. while consumption of oil will increase both in China an Middle East. To begin with, oil use of major consumer in US hover in 10 millions of barrels from 2009 and 2015, but precious fall is predict to just over 4 million by 2030. Western Europe and Japan is forecasted to maintain similiar pattern, where this will dwinled from 4 million to nearly over 2 million. However, China and Middle East expected to rise quickly. This nations started

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oil
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 Us, China, Western Europe and Japan and Middle East over a period of 21 years from 2009 to 2030.

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 perspective, it is readily
 apparent that, US is leading country for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoatgrease
oil
 usage per day, whereas it is Consider using a past participle here: "expected".expected
expect
 to fall dramatically
. Western Europe and Japan will continue to decline to become A determiner is probably missing here: "the lowest".the lowest
lowest
 point in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
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while
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oil
 will increase both in China Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
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begin
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oil
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use
 of major consumer in US hover in 10 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 of barrels Nonstandard phrase. Did you mean: "from 2009 to 2015"?from 2009 to 2015
from 2009 and 2015
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but
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predict
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just
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million
 by 2030. Western Europe and Japan is forecasted
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similiar
 pattern, where this will Possible spelling mistake found.dwindled
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million
 to nearly
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million
. However
, China and Middle East This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to rise quickly
. Did you mean "these"?These
This
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