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The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. g9e1
The bar chart and the table illustrate changes of the exports in five distinct industries in one nation between 2015 and 2016. Overall, it can be seen that export value in most categories witnessed an upward trend over the given period, except for the gems and jewel industry. Additionally, earnings from the exports of petroleum and engineered goods were the highest. With regards to petroleum products, there was a gradual increase in export value, from just over 60 billion to approximately 63 billion dollars between 2015 and 2016. A similar growth in value was seen in the export of engineered goods, at 8. 5%. Moreover, the remaining categories recorded lower export earnings. The amount of money earned from gems and jewellery decreased significantly by 5. 18%, from around 43 billion dollars in 2015 to just above 40 billion in 2016. In contrast, the export earnings of textile products experienced a 15. 24% rise to over 30 billion dollars in 2016, while the figure for agricultural products was fairly steady, at around 30 billion dollars.
The bar chart and the table illustrate
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changes
of the
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in five distinct industries in one nation between 2015 and 2016.

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, it can be
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seen
that
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export
value in most categories witnessed an upward trend over the
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given
period,
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except for
the gems and jewel industry.
Additionally
, earnings from the
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exports
of petroleum and engineered
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goods
were the highest.

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petroleum products, there was a gradual increase in
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value, from
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over 60
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billion
to approximately 63
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billion
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dollars
between 2015 and 2016. A similar growth in value was
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seen
in the
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export
of engineered
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goods
, at 8. 5%.

Moreover
, the remaining categories recorded lower
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earnings. The amount of money earned from gems and
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jewellery
decreased
significantly
by 5. 18%, from around 43
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billion
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in 2015 to
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above 40
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billion
in 2016.
In contrast
, the
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earnings of textile products experienced a 15. 24% rise to over 30
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billion
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dollars
in 2016, while the figure for agricultural products was
fairly
steady, at around 30
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billion
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.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

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