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The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada. Vq36
The bar chart provides information about the percentage of places visited by three distinct groups: native Canadians, recently arrived immigrants from English-speaking countries and new migrants for whom English is not their first language in their country. Overall, it is perhaps unsurprising that Canadians prefer the cinema to the theatre, but the popularity of the library with new migrants may reflect the financial circumstances of these new citizens. The cinema is by far the most popular free-time activity listed in the chart for those with English as their first language — 70% of non-migrants and 65% of English-speaking migrants. Half the migrants from non-English-speaking countries also go to see a film but interestingly, 5% more of this group prefer the library to the cinema. Roughly 40% of the other two groups say they visit the library. Zoos are visited most by half of the English-speaking migrants compared to just over 40% of those born in Canada and approximately 35% of the migrants born where English is not widely spoken. The theatre is least popular for all concerned, with only 10% of non-English-speaking migrants attending, while double the number of native Canadians go to see a play. A quarter of those born in English-speaking countries are theatre-goers.
The bar chart provides information about the percentage of places visited by three distinct groups: native Canadians, recently arrived immigrants from English-speaking countries and new
migrants
for whom English is not their
first
language in their country.

Overall
, it is perhaps unsurprising that Canadians prefer the cinema to the
theatre
,
but
the popularity of the library with new
migrants
may reflect the financial circumstances of these new citizens.

The cinema is by far the most popular free-time activity listed in the chart for those with English as their
first
language — 70% of non-migrants and 65% of English-speaking
migrants
. Half the
migrants
from non-English-speaking countries
also
go to
see
a film
but
interestingly
, 5% more of this group prefer the library to the cinema. Roughly 40% of the other two groups say they visit the library.

Zoos
are visited
most by half of the English-speaking
migrants
compared to
just
over 40% of those born in Canada and approximately 35% of the
migrants
born where English is not
widely
spoken. The
theatre
is least popular for all concerned, with
only
10% of non-English-speaking
migrants
attending, while double the number of native Canadians go to
see
a play. A quarter of those born in English-speaking countries are
theatre-goers
.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the places visited by different people living in Canada.

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