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The information regarding how many magazines were sold per individual in 2000 and 2010 in distinct five countries and predictions of sales for 2020 has depicted in the graph. At first looking, in 2000, there were near 50 magazines sold per person in country A and country B accounted for exactly 50. After that, the sum of magazines sales dropped in country C and D which was near 40 and near 20 respectively but in the country, E shared a very small number in sales of magazines as compared to other nations. In 2010, there were little drop-in sales of magazines in country A and also in country B and C which was near 50 and above 30 respectively. In-country D the sales of the magazine were lovely increased 20 and in-country it was between 028. Besides, projections for 2020 will be in country A is near 20 but in B country sales of magazines will be boomed to near 50 however in country D sales will be increased as compared to other nations. Overall, the streaking features of the graph is

The information regarding how many magazines were sold per individual in 2000 and 2010 in distinct five countries and predictions of sales for 2020 has depicted in the graph. At first looking, in 2000, there were near 50 magazines sold per person in country A and country B accounted for exactly 50. After that, the sum of magazines sales dropped in country C and D which was near 40 and near 20 respectively but in the country, E shared a very small number in sales of magazines as compared to other nations. In 2010, there were little drop-in sales of magazines in country A and also in country B and C which was near 50 and above 30 respectively. In-country D the sales of the magazine were lovely increased 20 and in-country it was between 028. Besides, projections for 2020 will be in country A is near 20 but in B country sales of magazines will be boomed to near 50 however in country D sales will be increased as compared to other nations. Overall, the streaking features of the graph is 1JNN
The information regarding how many magazines were sold per individual in 2000 and 2010 in distinct five countries and predictions of sales for 2020 has depicted in the graph. At first looking, in 2000, there were near 50 magazines sold per person in country A and country B accounted for exactly 50. After that, the sum of magazines sales dropped in country C and D which was near 40 and near 20 respectively but in the country, E shared a very small number in sales of magazines as compared to other nations. In 2010, there were little drop-in sales of magazines in country A and also in country B and C which was near 50 and above 30 respectively. In-country D the sales of the magazine were lovely increased 20 and in-country it was between 028. Besides, projections for 2020 will be in country A is near 20 but in B country sales of magazines will be boomed to near 50 however in country D sales will be increased as compared to other nations. Overall, the streaking features of the graph is country B and it is noticed that the least sales of magazines were in country E.
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IELTS academic The information regarding how many magazines were sold per individual in 2000 and 2010 in distinct five countries and predictions of sales for 2020 has depicted in the graph. At first looking, in 2000, there were near 50 magazines sold per person in country A and country B accounted for exactly 50. After that, the sum of magazines sales dropped in country C and D which was near 40 and near 20 respectively but in the country, E shared a very small number in sales of magazines as compared to other nations. In 2010, there were little drop-in sales of magazines in country A and also in country B and C which was near 50 and above 30 respectively. In-country D the sales of the magazine were lovely increased 20 and in-country it was between 028. Besides, projections for 2020 will be in country A is near 20 but in B country sales of magazines will be boomed to near 50 however in country D sales will be increased as compared to other nations. Overall, the streaking features of the graph is

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