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Computers and internet in Arab world

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The rendered bar graph illustrates the number of people who owned Computers and Internet in Arab countries. The data is given in numbers. Taking the statistical data into account it can be clearly be seen that the maximum individuals of UAE who used computers and internet calculated as 349 and 152 from per 1000 inhabitants whereas, minimum number of people owned computer and internet from Syria, Egypt and Morocco accounted as less than 50 from per 1000 inhabitants. Surprisingly, a near resemblance can be seen in Jordan and Oman in related to owned computers and internet. Probing ahead, a difference of 15 individuals can be noticed in Kuwait who bought computers and internet. Interestingly, 10 people owned computers and internet from per 1000 inhabitants. On the contrary 60 individuals used computers and internet from per 1000 inhabitants. Overall, it is crystal clear from bar chart that the majority of people from UAE used computers and internet in Arab world.
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that the maximum individuals
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computers and internet calculated as 349 and 152 from per 1000
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inhabitants
whereas, minimum number of
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people
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owned
computer and internet from Syria, Egypt and Morocco accounted as less than 50 from per 1000
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inhabitants
.
Surprisingly
, a near resemblance can be
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seen
in Jordan and Oman in related to
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owned
computers and internet. Probing ahead, a difference of 15 individuals can
be noticed
in Kuwait who
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bought
computers and internet.
Interestingly
, 10
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owned
computers and internet from per 1000
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inhabitants
.
On the contrary
60 individuals
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used
computers and internet from per 1000
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inhabitants
.
Overall
, it is crystal
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from bar chart that the majority of
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people
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from UAE
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used
computers and internet in Arab world.
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IELTS academic Computers and internet in Arab world

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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