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the graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries

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The presented bar graph illustrates the amount of tea and coffee imported by four countries namely Canada, US, UK and Germany. The measurement depict in tonnes. Overall, It is seen that the UK was the highest imported country in both beverages with the total of 110, 000 tonnes while Germany follows closely and importing with the total of 90, 000 tonnes. Whereas Canada and US both have only 60, 000 tonnes. To begin with, Canada and the USA both have equal number of tea and coffee, which is 20, 000 tonnes and 40, 000 tonnes respectively. Germany import double amount of tea, which is 40, 000 tonnes than Canada and US. But, the amount of coffee increased slightly up to 10, 000 tonnes and reached at almost 50, 000 tonnes. Then, the highest number of tea and coffee imports in the UK where 80, 000 tonnes of tea is imported and about 30, 000 tonnes of coffee is imported.
The presented bar graph illustrates the amount of
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imported
by four countries
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Canada, US, UK and Germany. The measurement depict in tonnes.

Overall
, It is
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that the UK was the highest
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imported
country in both beverages with the total of 110, 000 tonnes while Germany follows
closely
and importing with the total of 90, 000 tonnes. Whereas Canada and US both have
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only
60, 000 tonnes.

To
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begin
with, Canada and the USA both have equal number of
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tea
and
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coffee
, which is 20, 000 tonnes and 40, 000 tonnes
respectively
. Germany import double amount of
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tea
, which is 40, 000 tonnes than Canada and US.
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But
, the amount of
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coffee
increased
slightly
up to 10, 000 tonnes and reached at almost 50, 000 tonnes. Then, the highest number of
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tea
and
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coffee
imports in the UK where 80, 000 tonnes of
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tea
is
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imported
and about 30, 000 tonnes of
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coffee
is
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imported
.
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IELTS academic the graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries

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6.5
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