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The information below details household income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in one UK city in 2010 and 2013.

The information below details household income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in one UK city in 2010 and 2013. mAYq
The table illustrates the figures for household income in a UK city in 2010 and 2013, together with specific food and clothes expenditure. The pie chart shows how spending on food and clothes was broken down into five categories. Overall, it is clear that from the table, the total household income fell in 2013, while expenditure on food and clothes witnessed a slight increase. The proportion of spending on fruits and vegetables marked up the significant enhancement in a later year. In 2010, around 22% of people paid for clothes than about 20% of spenders on fruits and vegetables, and 25% spent on meat. Over the next three years, while the expenditure on fruits and vegetables, meat and fish witnessed a decrease, at 12% and 15% respectively, the proportion of spending on fruits and vegetables peaked 35%. By contrast, the percentage of spending on other food and drinks remained stable, at 18%. From 2010 to 2013, there was a tiny grew of 5% in the number of dairy expenditures.
The table illustrates the figures for household income in a UK city in 2010 and 2013, together with specific
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clothes
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expenditure
. The pie chart
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food
and
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clothes
was broken
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, it is
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clear
that from the table, the total household income fell in 2013, while
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expenditure
on
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food
and
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clothes
witnessed a slight increase. The proportion of
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spending
on
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fruits
and
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vegetables
marked up the significant enhancement in a later year.

In 2010, around 22% of
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people
paid for
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clothes
than about 20% of spenders on
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fruits
and
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vegetables
, and 25% spent on meat. Over the
next
three years, while the
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expenditure
on
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fruits
and
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vegetables
, meat and fish witnessed a decrease, at 12% and 15%
respectively
, the proportion of
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spending
on
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fruits
and
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vegetables
peaked 35%.

By contrast, the percentage of
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on other
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and drinks remained stable, at 18%. From 2010 to 2013, there was a tiny grew of 5% in the number of dairy
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.
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IELTS academic The information below details household income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in one UK city in 2010 and 2013.

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