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the incomes of the four cafes

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graph tells us the income of four cafes in New York over the last year namely, the tea room, internet express, Wi-Fi café and café cool. overall the income of the Wi-Fi café increased at the end of the year where the income of the tea room decreased. The tea room had the highest at the beginning of the year, with its number achieving by 160 As for the internet express, its income decreased constantly in the first half-year, and then it experienced a rapid increase in the second half year to about 135 dollars. By contrast, the internet express, wifi café and café cool had low incomes in January experienced sharp increase over the year and took their standard ad the top three cafes with an extensive profit. more over, from august unteil December, internet express café and café cool meet with constant rises in the the earning breakthrough by under to 100 to below 140and less than 60 until 120. in the intervening time, the revenue of wifi café lightly decreased to around 60, and then bounced up to 180

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, the tea room, internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexplicitexpressed
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, Wi-Fi café and café cool. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOverall
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 of the Wi-Fi café increased at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
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 of the tea room decreased.

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, with its number achieving by 160 As for the internet You use this word too often, consider replacing it withexplicitexpressed
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 to about 135 dollars.

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, Did you mean "Wi-Fi"? (This is the officially approved term by the Wi-Fi Alliance.)Wi-Fi
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 decreased to around 60, and then bounced up to 180