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The percentage of first-year teachers enlisted in Ontario from 2001 to 2007 are illustrated in the given line graph. Overall, the figure for English teachers gradually decreased, while the figure for the French ones experienced an upwarding trend over the period. When looking at the first 2 years of the graph, the data for French-language teachers was 70% in 2001, which was slightly lower than the rate of English-language professors. , at about 72%. In the next two-year period, the amount of English teachers hired declined bylost 16% each year. Meanwhile, there was a fluctuation in the proportion of French teachers, falling to just below 60% in 2002 and then climbing up by 10% in the following year. Moving to analyze the remainder of the graph, both two figures slightly increased, which was at 70% and 44% respectively. In the last two years, the percentage of French teachers slightly decreased and then reached its peak at 74% in the end. By contrast, the rate for recruited English teachers had a fall of 15%, and reached 28% in 2007.

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