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The graph shows the full number of tourists attending a particular Caribbean island during a 7 - year period, starting from 2010.

The graph shows the full number of tourists attending a particular Caribbean island during a 7 - year period, starting from 2010. Q2EDX
The graph shows the full number of tourists attending a particular Caribbean island during a 7 - year period, starting from 2010. Overall, the total number of tourists visiting the Caribbean island constantly rose during the whole period. Besides, the line graph for visitors staying on cruise ships was lower than visitors staying on island in the most of the period. In the first year, the general amount of tourist travelling to the Caribbean island levelled off approximately 1 million following which 75 000 of them decided to stay on the island while the otherwise decided to stay on cruise ships just about 25000. For the next 2 years the total number of tourists climbed noticeably around 1, 5 million people with significantly dipped to reach the lowest point of just under 25000 in the number of visitors staying on cruise ships, however, staying on the island showed a high indicator among visitors to reach about 1, 25 million. In the 2017 the island watched a steep grow to 3, 5 million in the total number of visitors. Also, the number of tourists who stayed on cruise ships illustrated a quick rise exactly 2 million, nevertheless the figure for visitors staying on the island maintained the same level just about 1, 5 million.
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illustrated a quick rise exactly 2
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