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The illustration reveals the extent of changes in the Meadow side village and Wontan town over the period from 1962 to 2021.

The illustration reveals the extent of changes in the Meadow side village and Wontan town over the period from 1962 to 2021. Bgxe9
The illustration reveals the extent of changes in the Meadow side village and Wontan town over the period from 1962 to 2021. When comparing 1962 with 1985, it can be seen that there was no connection or mode of transportation between village and Fontan town in 1962. However, in 1985 both towns got connected through the highway. Moreover, the new buildings were erected in the Meadow side village, like housing estate, super stone, etc. On the other hand, the latest map of 2021 shows that both village and town are completely connected to each other via highway and railway system. What's more, a business park is developed, which can be found in the middle area of the map whereas a hotel and station can be seen in the opposite direction of the business park. In a nutshell, it is clear that both Meadow side village and Wontan have undergone through various changes, like developing a highway, hotal, business park, etc.
The illustration reveals the extent of
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changes
in the Meadow side
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village
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Wontan
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town
over the period from 1962 to 2021.

When comparing 1962 with 1985, it can be
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seen
that there was no connection or mode of transportation between
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village
and
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Fontan
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town
in 1962.
However
, in 1985 both
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towns
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got
connected through the highway.
Moreover
, the new buildings
were erected
in the Meadow side
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village
, like housing estate, super stone, etc.

On the other hand
, the latest map of 2021
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shows
that both
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village
and
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town
are completely connected to each other via highway and railway system. What's more, a business park
is developed
, which can
be found
in the middle area of the map whereas a hotel and station can be
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seen
in the opposite direction of the business park.

In a nutshell, it is
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clear
that both Meadow side
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village
and
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Wontan
have undergone through various
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changes
, like developing a highway,
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hotal
, business park, etc.
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IELTS academic The illustration reveals the extent of changes in the Meadow side village and Wontan town over the period from 1962 to 2021.

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