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The graphs shows figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or collage lecturer.

The graphs shows figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or collage lecturer. RDGG
The statistics in the diagram below are gather in a University lecture. This consist of two graph one is bar graph showing the number of hours they occupied in a eight stress full occupations. Another is pie chart which highlighting the percentage of each person that can enhance a possible diseases. Overall, a person working in a business industry is the top profession the working more than the working hours while, Educators have a huge chance to adhere sickness in the future. Their are 8 professional listed on the statistics, some are working in restaurants, some in movie industry, lawyers, doctors and business persons. The least time working are the educators at about 20 hours only, while 30-40 hours are in the food industry. Subsequently, healthcare providers and people in the movie industry providing a service of 40-50 hours. On the contrary, the professionals in business world has the highest amount of time spending in their work at 60 hours. A greater amount of hours can lead to serious diseases in the future, according to the chart the least of getting sick is the programmers compose only at 5%. While, chefs, lawyer and business persons take the 9-10% chances. Moreover, second to the highest are doctors and movie producers at about 18-25%. And the most prevalent to the stress diseases that compose of 25% among are the Educators.
The statistics in the diagram below are gather in a University lecture. This consist of two graph one is bar graph showing the number of
hours
they occupied in
a
eight
stress
full occupations. Another is pie chart which highlighting the percentage of each
person
that can enhance a possible
diseases
.
Overall
, a
person
working
in a
business
industry
is the top profession the
working
more than the
working
hours
while, Educators have a huge chance to adhere sickness in the future.

Their
are 8 professional listed on the statistics,
some
are
working
in restaurants,
some
in movie
industry
, lawyers, doctors and
business
persons
. The least time
working
are the educators at about 20
hours
only
, while 30-40
hours
are in the food
industry
.
Subsequently
, healthcare providers and
people
in the movie
industry
providing a service of 40-50
hours
.
On the contrary
, the professionals in
business
world has the highest amount of time spending in their work at 60 hours.

A greater amount of
hours
can lead to serious diseases in the future, according to the chart the least of getting sick is the programmers compose
only
at 5%. While, chefs, lawyer and
business
persons
take the 9-10% chances.
Moreover
, second to the highest are doctors and movie producers at about 18-25%. And the most prevalent to the
stress
diseases that compose of 25% among are the Educators.
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IELTS academic The graphs shows figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups. Describe the information shown to a university or collage lecturer.

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