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The graphs illustrate the present situation and planned development of Islip town center.

The graphs illustrate the present situation and planned development of Islip town center. B7eBd

Regarding the future map, the most striking alternation will happen for transportation. A dual carriageway will be built around the city center, and the main road is predicted to be a pedestrian way. In addition, a car park will be constructed for car owners and a bus station is expected to be erected in the west of the area for people who go downtown by public transportation. Turning to the commercial landuse, the north row of the shops will be demolished, and a shopping center is planned to be built between the car park and bus station. However, the South row of the shops will remain the same. Furthermore, on the residential side, two new housing are predicted to be constructed in the North and South of the area. Moreover, the present park of the area will be contracted because of the new changes. Overall, the plan of the Islip town center will change this area considerably. The transportation will be pedestrian friendly, and some new facilities are expected to be made in the area.

Regarding the future map, the most striking alternation will happen for transportation. A dual carriageway will be built
 around the city center, and the main road is predicted
 to be a pedestrian way. In addition
, a car park will be constructed
 for car owners and a bus station is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to be erected
 in the west of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who go downtown by public transportation.

Turning to the commercial Possible spelling mistake found.land use
landuse
, the north row of the shops will be demolished
, and a shopping center is planned
 to be built
 between the car park and bus station. However
, the South row of the shops will remain the same. Furthermore
, on the residential side, two new housing are predicted
 to be constructed
 in the North and South of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Moreover
, the present park of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 will be contracted
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because
 of the new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
.

Overall
, the plan of the Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
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 town center will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
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area
considerably
. The transportation will be pedestrian friendly, and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new facilities are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to be made
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. 