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The graphs below shows the number of people at a london underground station from 6:00 to 22:00.

The graphs below shows the number of people at a london underground station from 6: 00 to 22: 00. K0bb1

The line graph illustrates the proportion of human at a metro station in the Great Britain. Overview, From the first glance, it can be observed that the number of metro passangers reached a high point at 400 at 8: 00 am, although, there are some fluctuations during the given period. To begin, at 6: 00 o'clock, the proportion of metro passangers stands at 100. Although, this number escalates enormously at 400 for about 2 hours, from 6: 00 till about 8: 00, for the following 2 hours, it slides suddenly at well under 200. During the next 4 hours, between 10: 00 and 14: 00, there are some marked reduction. It collapses rapidly to just under 100 until 16: 00, but later recovers to approximately 390 til 18: 00. For the following 2 hours, between 18: 00 and 20: 00, it takes a nose dive tremendously to well over 100. It roses significantly to nearby 180 until 21: 00, but then drops gradually to around 130, at the end of the given period, at 22: 00.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of human at a metro station in the Great Britain.

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