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The bar chart illustrates the number of different age groups of Australian male and female participated in daily physical activity in the year 2010.The data has been calibrated in percentage.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of different age groups of Australian male and female participated in daily physical activity in the year 2010. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Overall, there is a drastic increased observed in the age group(45 to 54) of Australian female in the year 2010, while age group 65 and over has been found the lowest one, who did involved in any physical activity throughout the year. On the other hand, there is a dramatic increments seen in the male age group (15 to 24), while the age group (25 to 34) of male was one of the least one, who were doing physical workout in the year 2010. It is quite clear from the bar chart, there is rapid increased seen in contribution of doing physical activity in the age group of Female(45 to 54) about 53. 3% followed by age group(55 to 64) by 53%, age group(25 to 34) by 48. 9%, 65 and above by 47. 1% and (55 to 64) age group by 45. 1% respectively. However, in Male population the age group(15 to 24) was one of the highest one of doing physical task by 52. 8%. Even, the age group(65 and over ) found the moderate one population by 46. 7% in 2010. On the other hand, the age groups (25 to 34), (35 to 44), (45 to 54) and (55 to 64) were having population by 42. 2%, 39. 5%, 43. 1%and 45. 1% respectively.

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