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The graphs below shows the number of magazines sold in 5 different countries in 2005 and 2015. A prediction for 2025 is also given.

The graphs below shows the number of magazines sold in 5 different countries in 2005 and 2015. A prediction for 2025 is also given. k5yyO
the bar graph illustrates the details of how many magazines are sold in different countries in the years of 2005 and 2015 as well as the future predictions also for 2025. To begin with, in the Year 2005 the members of magazines are cell 14 thousands in the France. It was very high cells in that time. the u. s. Sold approximately 33, 000 magazines, which is the second highest in that particular time there for the UK and Italy Spain's. UK Italy and Spain sold respectively 23, 000, 15, 000 and 5, 000 magazines. Analyzing the Year 2015 France was stand on the first positions and sold less numbers of particles compared to the 2005 which is around 38, 000. The second positions is the also taken by USA with 34, 000 magazines sold, which is slightly higher than the compared to the 2005 UK and Italy has sold the 20, 000 magazines each. where spain sold only 6, 000. to predict the year 2025 the France can be sell around 35, 000 is also the US and UK can be sell around something 25 thousands and 80, 000 respectively the Spain where cell has sold in 2005 as in the next two decades that the particular time the Italy has sell as per study is the only 1, 000 magazines. Overall, the France and the u. s. These two country has sold maximum magazines that compared to UK Italy and Spain in the given years 2005 2015 and the predicted year 2025.
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, which is the second highest in that particular time there for the UK and Italy Spain's. UK Italy and Spain sold
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2015 France was stand on the
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the Spain where cell has sold in 2005 as in the
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