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the monthly ridership of four saparate tránportation

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of the monthly ridership of for separate transportation forms in a European metropolitan area from 1980 to 2039, namely Subway, Tram, Bus and Bike Shảe. It is clear that the the proportion of Subway had the highest of 4 transportations. It is also noticeable that the data for Subway and Tram increase sharply, while the figure for Bus saw a sudden dip. In 1980, the percentsge of monthly ridership of Subway was highest, at around 2. 5%, followed by the figures for Tram and Bus, at nearly 0. 4% and 1. 6%. ten years later, the proportion of monthly rideship of Subway divered remained unchanged, whilst the data for Bus witnessed a slight fall. Meanwhile, the percentage of people who drove Tram saw a increased gently, reaching nearly 0. 5%. In 2000, the proportion of monthly ridership of Bike Share was introduced, with its data standing at about 0. 2%. in 2030, the figures for Subway and Tram are expected to rose dramatically in the range of roughly 4. 5% and 2%. At the same time, the proportion of people driving Bus is predicted to drop gentle, whereas the data for Bike Share is expected to remained static, at approximately 0. 5%.
The line graph illustrates the percentage of the
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ridership of for separate transportation forms in a European metropolitan area from 1980 to 2039,
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Subway
, Tram, Bus and Bike
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Shảe
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the the
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proportion
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Subway
had the highest of 4 transportations. It is
also
noticeable that the
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data
for
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Subway
and Tram increase
sharply
, while the figure for Bus
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saw
a sudden dip.

In 1980, the
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ridership of
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Subway
was highest, at around 2. 5%, followed by the figures for Tram and Bus, at
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0. 4% and 1. 6%.
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ten
years later, the
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Subway
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divered
remained unchanged, whilst the
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for Bus witnessed a slight fall. Meanwhile, the percentage of
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who drove Tram
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increased
gently
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In 2000, the
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ridership of Bike Share
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standing at about 0. 2%.
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in
2030, the figures for
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Subway
and Tram are
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is predicted
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to remained static, at approximately 0. 5%.
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IELTS academic the monthly ridership of four saparate tránportation

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