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political campaigns in Australia

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The table illustrates the amount of money in Australian billion dollars spent in political campaigns throughout different parts of Australia, and the bar chart is the total spending in different years. Both the table and the chart shows the numbers in the time period of 1999 to 2002. As it is shown in the table New South Wales benefited from the most significant allocation of the campaign budget among other cities. From 1999 to 2002 the budget experienced a major increase from 18 to 27 billion dollars. Total political spending in Victoria also experienced an increase, from 16 to 21 billion dollars although this seems more gradual, compared to the previous city. The budget spent on other cities, on the other hand, was more constant through time compared to major cities. in Queensland 11 and 14 billion dollars were spent on political campaigns and finally Tasmanian faced the least change in the amount of spending from 1999 to 2002, the related numbers in this city were 5 and 7 billion. As it can be seen in the bar chart, the total numbers, spend in all cities, gradually increased in the span of 4 years from 1999. In the first-year total spending was about 58 billion dollars, which increased to over 60 billion in 2000. In 2001 the numbers had a more dramatic jump to over 80 billion. And in the last year, 2002, numbers grew slightly above 85 billion dollars. Considering all information shown in the chart and the table, it can be seen that the overall spendings on Australian political campaigns increased constantly in the span of 4 years.
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spent in political
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campaigns
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New South Wales benefited from the most significant allocation of the
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budget among other
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from 1999 to 2002, the related
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in this city were 5 and 7 billion.

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was about 58
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, which increased to over 60
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in 2000. In 2001 the
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, 2002,
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IELTS academic political campaigns in Australia

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